Hey John, I think the solutions your offering in reference to transportation would be a great combination of offerings and they would definitely result in easier transportation. Relating to your elevator pitch, I think you were very serious in explaining your business idea and it made me take the idea more seriously. I think it was a great approach.
This was a good elevator pitch you explain your idea well and I can follow it clearly. I also like your pacing you kept it slow which also helped in getting your idea across. One thing I would say could be improved upon is adding a little more excitement to your voice so someone could know your excited about your business.
Hey John, I think the solutions your offering in reference to transportation would be a great combination of offerings and they would definitely result in easier transportation. Relating to your elevator pitch, I think you were very serious in explaining your business idea and it made me take the idea more seriously. I think it was a great approach.
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ReplyDeleteThis was a good elevator pitch you explain your idea well and I can follow it clearly. I also like your pacing you kept it slow which also helped in getting your idea across. One thing I would say could be improved upon is adding a little more excitement to your voice so someone could know your excited about your business.